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I am working on a Print on Demand business. This is the third time around where I am trying to figure out what I think is fun to work with and what I hope will prove sellable. The sellable part is not the most important, tbh. I have fun doing the designs and it is good exercise in learning Adobe Illustrator
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Versions
I added a flag, LOL. That made the design work. For me, at least.
What's working
Great work. I like the mood of the collection and the depth of the images. It feels like you can sail out into space.
What's not
this "love revised" version feels more still than the other one which has the reflection of the heart in the water. I like the dramatic size of the heart in the other images better as well. I don't mind the flag but I think a big heart with the reflection in the water gets the message across especially with "love" written at the bottom.
What I'd try differently
I like the reflection in the water from the heart cast over the boat in the other image. It gives a more dramatic sense of scale and depth. Maybe keep that in the "love revised" version of the love poster
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