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My client had a specific problem he needed fixed: when the rear seats of his Bronco Raptor are folded down, they are not flat. The slant of the seats allows for all his belongings to slide to the rear of the vehicle upon acceleration. My adjustable-height platform both levels out the rear seat and adds convenient lashing points to ensure his gear stays put. He also kindly agreed to let me own the rights to my design and list additional stock for sale on my website.
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What do you think of the layout, content, everything tbh. I’m hoping to appeal to other designers as well as potential freelance clients (outdoors companies). Is it clear what the product is/does? Too wordy?
Good work Jordan!! Your works has such a cool style. I think the product design and branding is on point with the target audience. My only concern (more of a questions) is what is the goal of this slide deck? Is it a portfolio piece to show process work for future clients or to pitch this product to an existing client? I think it works well as the first and less as the latter. If I'm a new client looking to work with you, I would love to see they hand drawn concept work and the benefits you provided to customers, but if you are pitching it to me as a concept that we've been working on then I don't really care much for slides 4-8 I just want to be impressed by 9-14. For the style, I like the front page but it seems to lose that flare by the end of the slides. The product is awesome I think you could add some of it's style to the slides.
Thanks, Din! This is primarily just a portfolio piece to show off a past project. Definitely need to add more visual elements to the final slide!!
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